The truth is I can't drive to come see you,
We won't ever fish by the lake again,
The truth is our family will never be the same,
You'll only be able to see those moments from heaven.
The biggest change I made to my last stanza was point-blank saying what the poem was about by adding the part about being in heaven. I can't decide if I want to leave I a little mysterious or point blank like this? Opinions?
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