Society has expectations
That no one ever meets
But what's so wrong with
Marching to a different beat?
It doesn't make you wrong
Or bad in any way
If you go with what you feel
And not care what they say.
It's all anyone wants
To be accepted as a whole
Without changing anything
Or trying to fit the mold.
Be a different color
Because you're one of a kind
Take a chance once in awhile
Don't be afraid to speak your mind.
Words can hurt like fire
Even when there cold as ice
But no one can make you feel
Like you're less than suffice.
*this is just a start to my next individual piece, questions, comments, advice??*
hullo. Hows it going? that's good (I hope). Cool poem dawg. It's honest and true and pretty much anyone can relate to it. I don't know nothing about poetry so as far as I know its the greatest poem ever, which it probably is. I do know that suffice is a verb, so I dont think it fits in the context you have it. But then again, poetry likes to break the rules, so I really dont know.
ReplyDeleteThanks Conner! I changed the last stanza to make it fit! I appreciate it! :)
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about feeling and how people work. very good
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