Friday, April 8, 2011

Writing Marathon

I watched it fly away with it's wings spread wide, soaring high into the sky. Part of me wondered where it must be going. After all the possibilities are endless, that must be nice. I wish I had that freedom and power. The best part about it was no one would know, there would be no one to answer to or explain myself to. Just me and freedom. Maybe that is why birds always seem so peaceful and why people describe their chirps as sining. After all it is a happy noise, wouldn't you be happy if you had that freedom? Right under their wings they have the power to go and never be seen again. Yeah, if I ever wanted to be an animal it was in that moment.
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 8, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Birds sin? anywho, very awesome. I wish I could fly too. Number 1 super power right there.

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  2. KaitlynAsh11April 11, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    I love the sudle rhyming. "It's wings spread wide, soaring high into the sky"

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  3. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    I really like this I love how you started it. "I watched it fly away with it's wings spread wide, soaring high into the sky. It is very nice.

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  4. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    the way you started it got my attention right away, I felt that it was very good.

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  5. strickApril 11, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    i think that u were sitting by me while u were writing this....overall very good work daughter

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  6. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    You grabbed the reader's attention really well. Right from the start I was drawn in.

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  7. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    It was very detailed and very interesting!

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  8. Eliot!April 11, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    i like wen you talk about it soaring because i love soaring high in the sky joking but really good piece

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